Friday, March 11, 2016

SOL #11

That feeling when you want to do something but shouldn't
That feeling when you are about to do something you don't want to do
That feeling when you step outside in the middle of the night
That feeling when you talk to someone and make them smile
That feeling when you make the whole class laugh
That feeling when you get a standing ovation
That feeling when you run really fast
That feeling when you finish something
That feeling when you wish you were someone else
That feeling when you see someone you love
That feeling when you are all alone
That feeling when you fall really far
That feeling when you laugh for a really long time for no real reason

That feeling when you are happy
                                        or sad
                                        or mad
                                        or confused
                                     
That feeling

4 comments:

  1. Wow! This is really great and emotional. Good job Sof!!!1

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  2. I can totally feel each of these emotions! Nice job!

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  3. You convey the feeling of each emotion really well. It is a really cool idea for a slice!

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  4. That feeling when you read poetry that touches you. Wonderful poem and how you repeated the lines was lovely.

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