My feet dangling off the high ledge
I can see all around me
The tops of houses and trees.
I feel like I'm on top of the world
A feeling I almost never get
Little kids run down below.
Lemonade! Lemonade!
I hear them yell
Wind sweeps my hair away
and I look at the wood chips around me
The clouds swim across the sky
and I see cars are by
My feet kick empty air
and
I'm up so high.
Good job! I like this poem, it really captures the scene and voice.
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ReplyDeleteI could really picture what was happening! Great slice!
ReplyDeleteYou described the view really well! Great job!
ReplyDeleteI love this feeling as well, and you capture it in a serene but detailed way that really fits the topic. I could really picture what was happening! Nice poem!
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